The true LOVE

I have tried very hard,
to get a fine looking match,
but the journey seems not to last,
as my eyes lie when they glance,
at those "girls" who play hard,
Now and forever as time pass,
i will wait for her to come,
and we live a life that a bides,
a true sweet love for life,
which Allah has proclaimed!

salams

Asalamualeykum brthers n sister....i would wish 2 know if the poem above is good...so that i keep on writing more poems.shukran.

MashaaAllaah

Yes MashaaAllaah it is good, keep writing, writing is also very expressive, sometimes people can relate to as well, you actually learn alot the more you write

Nice

It's a nice pome don't stop keep writeing
the more u write the better u get